9)+Roneil+Wright

ASSIGNMENT 1

1) LUDACRIS because he could teach us how to make money so that we could buy better books,computers,and hire better teachers like Mr.Boll and not like Ms.Mourhead or some other random teacher and if we get more money we can have middle school and the high school into different buildings and we can get what ever we wanted and kids will do their school work all day for money.Also we can get the 6th grade into the school then the elementary school could have less kids and we can give more money to their schools also but we will eventually run out of of money but then we know how to get money thanks to LUDACRIS.That is why Ludacris would inspire the Wilkinsburg students.

ASSIGNMENT 2 This is about my house.It is big and one part of it looks like a castle if you go in and look at it it's like a big circle and it is tall it has rooms almost as big as two of Mr.Bolls classrooms.Also my room is the smallest in my house even my little brothers room is bigger than mine. If you see the living room it is a giant room if you run around in it you will get tired in about a minute it will freak you out about my back yard you can play football in it it's not like a football field butit is big enough. It is like living in a miniture mansion maybe if it was twice as big it would be a mansion. When I get home I have to walk up two flights of stairs and my room is always cold and if I open up the window it will be as cold as living in a realy big freezer. I enjoy reading your writing. This is a good descriptive passage about your house. I like how you describe the size and compare it to a mansion. I also like the simile in the last sentence that compares your room to a freezer. You work really quickly, which can be a really good thing because it means that you usually get you classwork done. In writing, it can sometimes help you to take some time and look over your work. There are some run-on sentences here. But you can be a good writer, and your are well on your way. Keep working hard.

ASSIGNMENT#3 If you want to get better at basketball follow these helpful hints. Go to a court everyday for 3 hours each day. Have a ball that you can bounce easily without a struggle. Also have someone to help you play. If you still don't get better practice shooting into a bigger hole like a basket or any thing you can shoot easily into. Then start shooting into smaller and smaller holes then after a while go back to shooting in a basket. Then I bet you will become 'Better At Basketball". But if you do not get better than you are bad at basketball and YOU are weak at it too. "FOOTBALL"!

ASSIGNMENT#4 If the principal puts a policy that all students have to wear uniforms. I won't like it I will switch schools and every student will still wear the same clothes as they already were instead of uniforms. Every student will get the regular school clothes instead of stupid uniforms,but if the students stop working then the teachers can not get paid. Every student will only listen in certain classes like gym,art,Mr.Boll's class and other classes. If that happens the school will go crazy and it will be shut down and the school will have to get every single student a teacher at their house or a private teacher( not all school teachers ).

ASSIGNMENT#4 PART TWO

We should ask the wealthy doner to make a movie theater. It can be a very special thing for all the students. All the students will try to get into the movie theater. But they have to put cool movies or the students won't care they would only do their work for movies like "Diary of a wimpy kid",Epic movie,"Freddie vs Jason" and others. If the students get to see the movie techers would get more work done,students would listen to all teachers and arguing would stop. Although students would listen they should not ever say only "THE FIVE MAIN TEACHERS". So thats why we should ask the wealthy doner to build a movie theater.

ASSIGNMENT#4 PART THREE

The government should make a holiday called Boll Day. It would honor Mr.Boll because he is the best teacher in wilkinsburgh junior high.Maybe we could let him have that day off and that is the first part. Mr.Boll always is nice and never gets mad at something stupid like most teachers. If Mr.Boll gets his own holiday he will be the greatest known teacher it will get all over the world. It would make other kids come to this school which will get the school more money and the teachers would get paid more and this school would be visited by Barock Obama. That is why we should give Mr.Boll his own holiday. YA

Thanks man. I'll take the day off! You are a clear and organized writer and you should be proud of the progress you have made here. This is not what I was envisioning for assignment four, but your writing is solid. keep it up.

ASSIGNMENT#4 PART FOUR ( FINAL)

If a NFL player should be nominated as the best it should be Hines Ward. He is the best wide reciver in the NFL. Plus he has been playing for the longest time and he is the most famous wide reciver no the Steelers. Maybe if he was the best than the stelers would get more epriciation from more people. They can get people to be able to train with him and get to know Hines Ward. If people get to know him then rhey would realy know how he is than everybody would want to nominate him as the best NFL player. Thats is why people should nominate Hines Ward for the best NFL player in the N F L.( NATIONAL FOTBALL LEAGE. ).

ASSIGNMENT#5 I am writing about the boy who lit the other kids pants on fire. If little kids figure out how to they will demand that their parents get them things. If that happens other kids will figure out that it worked and if they try to get angry they will light their pants on fire again. Then peole will have to get even more pants but their kids will keep lighting their pants on fire until they get what they want. But eventually parents will light their kids pants on fire then they will go to stores and burn those pants. But if that happens then I will just wear shorts. Until they start burning shorts then i'm locking my door and keeping my pants and shorts in my room. Then I will have my pants in my room, that is why I wrote about the boy who lit the other kids pants on fire.

ASSIGNMENT#6 ==My name is "Rocky Retro" I am the best wave surfer in Australia. If you challenge me to it you will be outmatched by my skills. Maybe if the challenge is crazy enough to get me killed you have to ride the wave first. That was until I met "Alfrito Dirito" and he challenged me to ride the biggest wave,wave Texas it is about 50 feet high and 120 feet wide so he challenges me to it he said I had to go first. So I said " what do I get if I win" and "he said $100,000 and you will be known as the best in Australia". I said "ok" and I did and now you see me on wave " TEXAS". And I am on the biggest most exiting wave in my life it feels like i'm flying but if I fall off my board it could mean certain death.( IF YOU EVER GET CHALLENGED TO RIDE A WAVE LIKE THIS SOMETIMES IT IS OK TO CHICKEN OUT JUST SAY NO WAY YOU ARE CRAZY).And the wave is like riding in a giant water clams mouth and you fall it will swallow you whole.I am the best known wave furfer in Australia but i'm not a god I can't livr through anything so if I make one wrong mistake I could go tumbiling to my death.==

ASSIGNMENT#7+7=7

Did you ever wake up and you feel like you might just go crazy! If you did than you have something called being tired and if you have it lay down put your head on your pillow pull the covers over you and go back to sleep. Then if someone wakes you up and says the 3 words no kid wants to hear they are ( TIME FOR SCHOOL ). Those are the one words nobody wants to hear so if you do it is ok to get angry or sad cause you had a good dream.

ASSIGNMENT#8

My personal narrative is about when I went to D&B and I had an personal experience but if you go to there don't do what I do. If I tell you you will not think it is boring but you probably don't even read. Now the first part is that we went to D&B and my brother went staight to the games. My little brother went to the table and said ( I"M HUNGRY) I just thought that I would eat first My oldest broyher ordered almost every thing on the menu including chicken,shrimp,turkey,nachos,and every thing else you can think. He didn't even eat all of it he just saved it and ate it when he got home if you ever ever ever go to D&B don't take my brother or someone like him. If you eat something from a place at least try FISHI'N HOOKS and if you don't like it go to subway or Mc Donalds they are proably the best places to go if you want somrthing fast and something good. But if you want to something fast but not too good then just go to Get Go. ASSIGNMENT #8 PARAGRAPH 2

Where did I leave off oh yeah the Get Go thing so next we went to go play the games and while we played games my uncle tried everything on the menu even some deserts but like my brother he didn't eat most of it. Once he went to play wheel of fortune and he play all other games too just like I did. But he only beat 3 games out of every other game.( on Monday I will continue).

Ok, Good start. I think you got a little sidetracked there. Please continue to work to add description. You could add some description about what D and B's looks like. How does that feel for a kid?

(continued) If you describe D&B it is a big building it looks like your entering a hotel. But you have to park your own car and then if you go inside a kid would get exited and try to be the first one in. If you go inside you will hear a bunch of game noise and you will see a person at the front desk and you then pay to get in. From there you go in and there's another counter where you buy cards that have the game limit on it. Then you can go and sit down but someone will take you to a seat and you can order or you can go and play games.If you go play games I advize you to eat first so then you can go play games without getting hungry for a while. Then once you leave you will want to stay there or keep coming back their every single day.

Next I will describe how it would be to go to D&B. It is like going to an arcade but you can eat too and there is many games you can play. So if you get bored at D&B than you just have no feeling of happiness or exitement in your life. So make sure to play all the games at D&B or you will get bored and if you leave your friends or family will hate you for making them leave.If that happens next time they go to a cool place they will never ever take you again and if you ask them even beg they will say the word no one ever wants to hear when they ask fo something or something "NO". But if you enjoy yourself or if you get bored and go eat then order something that is the best on the menu to you or maybe what someone that has been there alot of times is good.

In this paragrapgh I will talk about what time you should go and why. When you go to D&B go at 10:00 because that is when most people will want to go to a place for breakfast. But some people are crazy and will be there wnen it opens it's earliest. So if those people are there then get in before they do and get on the game you want to play and play it till you get bored and want to go onto a different game. If you get there and there's alot of cars then you are as late and you will only have a couple of games to play. That is my final paragrapgh about what time to go to D&B and why it is the best time to go there!!!!!!!

ASSIGNMENT#9 I think that Barack Obama is an influencel person because through all the odds of humanity he managed to do the things he wanted and even bigger is that he became the president of the united states.He has a wife and two kids and he manages to be the president and has time to spend the with his family and has time for himself.He is the first African American president ever,he is the best president to be able to have all this and do all that. But unlike other rescent presidents he goes to schools and he gives them an influencel speech to always do their best and always stay in school and they too can one day be the president.If theirs anything he has tought other people is that to always stay on the right path and not end up being bad because you may be cool now but in the future when your broke and have no house so always stay the way you are and don't be like ___! Barack Obama also sent an American force squad to kill bin laden and the mission was successful. He also helped lower the cost of taxis in the world and help the disease spreading in Africa. He also helps to cure certain diseases in the world not just in Africa but in other countries.

ASSIGNMENT#11 PROGRESS IS GOOD Those are what progress is good for and if you have all the things mentioned in the the top you can make peace not just in one country not even two but you can make peace in the entire world.
 * 1) 1 SUPPORT : The more progress the more followers we make and the more support we get from them.
 * 2) 2 FRIENDS : The more friends that you make the less chance you will make enimies.
 * 3) 3 PEACE : We can make more peace on Earth and more peace on countries in the Earth.