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7th grade A year of 7th grade  a year that's end is coming fast  all the memories  looking back to the past  ﻿all my friends  they come and go  look how much we grow  every year we get smarter  all my feelings i try to show

assignment 10 : Michael Joseph Jackson was born on 29thof august 1958 in Gary Indiana. He was the 7th of 9 children. Michael beganhis music careerat theage of5as the lead singer of the jackson 5 who formed in 1964. In 1977 Michael made his first film debut when he starred in the musical the wiz. He was the king of pop. Also, he is on the hollywood walk of fame. He helped by founding the heal the world foundation so children can come and enjoy his theme park. All his hair caught on fire and he kept his career going. He was also a notable humanitarian and philanthropist, donating, and raising hundreds of million of dollars for beneficial causes and supporting more than 39 charities. Those are some of his achievemens.

ssignment 8: Have you ever been so hot that you would swim in ice. Well we were, but then we went to sand castle. We were so happy that we didn't have to be so hot. As soon as we got told we were going to go to sand castle we went right up stairs and got our stuff together. It was like a savior to us. When I was getting my bathing suit I fell down and hit my head so I was about to cry. Well then we got our flip flops on and left. On ur way to sand castle my sister and I sat in the trunk amd we was cutting up. I fell over on the way there and she almost kicked me in my face. Then we were talking about the man in the car behind us because I think he was picking his nose. We started cracking up then her mom turned the music up and told us to be quite. So then we just started waving at every car behind us and sime cars waved back. We were making faces at people and this one lady started laughing. Then I got into an fight with her brother because of something stupid. So then I just started singing the song that was on. Then her mom said something funny and everybody in the car started laughing. When we arrived at sand castle we got out the car and I couldn't find one of my flip flops and then the ground was hot on my feet so I started screaming and my sister started laughing at me. It was so bright outside and then my sister and I started running to the enterence. When we got in we went to the changing room an this little girl fell when she ran out the stall and I started cracking up, but then her mom came out and was looking at me weird so I rolled my eyes and walked into my stall and changed. After that we went to the mushroom pool and I jumped in. I had to push my sister in. Then she jumped on my back and I started swimming. We got out and dried off a little. We went to the water slides next. We went to the ride where you drop 6 feet and there were these little boys in line with there mom. One of the little boys was screaming at the top of his lungs so my head started hurting and i wanted to punch him in his face. It went so fast. That was good I guess. After that we went to the yellow slide and my sister could'nt get on because she was to short so I rode it. Then she was to short for the biggest slide and i rode that by myself to. Next we went to the tube slides and we got the double tube so we could ride together and I fell out when we were going down the slide. We went down the other sslide by ourselves but it was fun. Then we went on the lazy river and there were these drunk people and they kept asking us stuff so I told the lady to leave us alone. They were super loud. <span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">When we got done doing that we went to the wave pool and it was fun. We were playing around. Then my god sister kept going under water. So we had to go closer to the beginning. We went and got some cheese fries and ice cream. Then we went back to the pool and saw these boys and they asked if we wanted to play marco polo and we said yes. So we started playing. It was funny one of the boys was fat and he walked into the sidee of the pool when he was it and we started laughing and he got mad. But this one boy is thomas and he didn't like to go under water and the fat boy dunked him and we went hard on the fat boy because he made thomas choke and made him get out the pool. I felt bad for thomas he was all scared to get out the pool. then we left. That is my story about sand castle. I learned that you can turn a hot boing day into a hot, fun, and exciting day. THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Very good job with this Allie. This is some of the best writing I have seen you do so far this year. YOu did a good job describing the day and focusing on why <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">it was so fun for you. You also did a good job a describing people that show up in the story. I want you to do two things. First, I want you to add a conclusion. As I have said in class, a good narrative has a lesson or something you learned at the end. IN this case, you could just learn that time spent with the people closest to you can be the most important thing in life. It sounds like you had a lot of fun becuase your sister was there with you. Second, i just want you to look over it for any quick proofreading that you can do. Good intro. I'm excited to read the narrative. Keep working hard in class Allie. <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">﻿ <span style="color: #36d936; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">assignment 6:﻿ Have you ever been attacted by a tiger. My name is bob and i did. I thought I was going to die. I got told I was lucky to be alive. Who would of thought that one day when you were doing your job and minding your own business you could just get attacted out of nowhere. At first I didn't know how bad I got it. I was in shock until I felt the side of my face and my cheek was hanging off and a peice of my ear was gone. It started hurting and I was in so much pain. I got rushed to the hospital and got 100 staples in my face. Now I have four scarres on my face. This is my story and how I got scarred. I was in the tiger cage cleaning it out. It was a very hot day and the tiger was in the cave part of the cage. When I looked at the tiger it was sound a sleep. So I started cleaning I did it every week.The tiger was not the type of tiger that would attact you. Well I was cleaning the tigers food bowl and he cae up behind me and then attacted me and it had a grip f my head with its teeth. Then one of the other workers came and pulled me out. That is my story. <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">assignment 4: I think a good idea is to build a kids program. Kids can go after school and play or something like that. It will help kids stay off the street.I think in my own opinion that it will benefit parents to. If a parent is working or does not have a babysitter she could take her kid to the program. Maybe, you can have incentives for the kids so they can work for what they want. They could have certain rotations different days of the week. <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">I think that it would be a good idea for kids to go play after school and interact with others. Some kids who keep to themselves can meet new kids and feel better. It couls help for kids to express what they like and ans want. It can be a place for kids to meet after school and have fun. It could keep kids out of trouble. It is an easy way to have fun. It is a good social idea for kids to meet new friends and have fun. <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">I also, think it would be a good idea to keep kids off the street. You would want something bad to happen to your kids if they didn't have a good place to go after scchool and they want to go have fun with there friends. Alot of young kids are getting in more trouble because they don't have nothing preductive to do. It can keep your kids out of trouble. I think less fights, vandalism, graffiti, ect. will happen. It could affect alot of kids in a good way. It could keep kids from getting hurt and parents will feel better knowing there kids will be in good hands. <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">I think it will benifit parents because if they have work and they don't have no one to watch tem. I think that if you don't trust your kid at your house you can take them there and they probably will like it <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Ally- Sorry if my note ruins your colorful page, I won't be hurt if you delete it later. You have the right idea here are doing a really nice job. Keep it up. I think there could be more detail on some of these paragraphs. But generally, you are on your way to a really good paper. <span style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">assignment 2: I am writing a descrip﻿tive paragraph about my room. Well to start off with my walls are all white. When u first go in my room you will see my bed and my side tables. There is my bookcase with all my stuff on it. Also, there is my TV and I have my closet is on the right when you first go in. Then there is this room where my dressers and my mirrors are at. My bed set is either purple or red. It depends on what blanket I have. I have stickers on my walls and my windows. I also, have my stuffed animals in this bin in my room by my closet. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif;">Assignment 1: The speaker I pick to motivate Wilkinsburg Middle School is Barack Obama. The reason why I think he would be a good speaker is because I think he can make a change at our school. He did alot of speeches and he could come up with a good speech to motivate us. Also, I think he will inspire some of the kids at our school to do good and listen. Alot of people envy Obama. He is a president. He is not perfect, but he probably had bad days and he made it out to be a president. He had a dream and he went for what he wanted and succeeded at it. Anybody can say they are gonna be a president when they get older or a doctor, but the thing about it is that you can say something but its different to do it. Thats why I think obama is a good motivating speaker. <span style="color: #0000ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">﻿ <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Good job with the paragraph about the motivational speaker. You did a really good job of staying organized in your writing and clearly supporting your belief that Obama would be a good speaker. You also did a good job of saying why this could be a good message for WMS students. You are a good writer when you work hard. Keep going with your descriptive paragraph. <span style="color: #ff00ff; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">﻿ <span style="color: #ff7600; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">