16)+Ciara+Ramsey

Heyy Yungn..!~
heyy. I pick Oprah Winfrey. I think she will motivate students in the right path and I also think that she would encourage students to becareful of how they treat their teachers. Students behavior really need to change so the school could be a safe place to be. Oprah Winfrey would make children smile and think about what they are doing. Oprah is a business woman that will give good advice to students to really make the school a safe place. But also I think children and other people would believe and understand what she( Oprah W.) is trying to get into people.

Good job Ciara. I think you have a really good, organized, paragraph here. You could add why Oprah would be able to convince students to listen to teachers. Why would she be better than other people at telling students this? I like that you equated this with safety. Students have to feel safe before they are able to learn. Good job.

Assignment 3
This room is big and has alot of dust everywhere. This room has signs, chalkboards, books, and etc. Sometimes this room have computers and have a big sign. '' BIG ?'s "

﻿Assignment #4: The Persuasive Essay (Week2)

If I could have any place for the youth in wilkinsburgh it would be a swimming place. I pick the swimming place because some people don't know how to swim, and it could give them an opportunity to try. Another reason why I pick this is because some people can swim but people barely have any money or dosen't have no way to go. So this is why I chose what I chose.

Assignment #5

This article was about the police carrying 7 searches in missing woman case. The woman name was Alivia kail and she was missing after the date of March 3. The police don't think weather Ms.kail is alive but he is trying to find out. The police said Ms.kail was last seen on March 3 and they think Mr.Lorenzi is guilty.

Assignment #6

My name is Ta'shiki Burger and I live in Nigeria. I am the one in the black and gray picture with the person in it. If you want to know what happen to me this is how: On a Monday, I was walking past shumans an this one came out saying let me hold a dollar and I was thinking to self  run  and that's what I did but, somehow they end up catching me. So they grab me threw me on the ground, starting kicking me and saying next time I say give me a dollar that's what I mean. Then I spit on him and he wiped it off and took a knife out his pocket and started cutting me up. After that this car that rode by me stop and a woman and a man got out of it and pick me up an put me in the car. Then I woke in the hospital an saw most of my family. I felt so mad that I was thinking about going back for revenge but I didnt, I was also happy that my family was at the hospital with me. After a week an a half I was out the hospital.

Assignment #8

The story that I am about to tell you about is very interesting, it has many characters with funny sayings.

To begin with, It was Daysha, Mariah, Shelby, and me outside on a saturday and we went to go meet up with Destine, Joi, Alley, and Dominique. We went to the store to go buy some chips and candy. In the middle of paying for our stuff someone tried to rob the store. But while we were at the register we kept our cool and then soon as me n Dominique got done paying for our stuff we slipped. Then when we got up dominique teeth was across the street and my teeth had chipped. Then I got back up everybody kept asking me was I cool and then I was like yea and then all of us went to by my house. So when I got I ran up the stairs and knocked on the door so hard because I was bleeding an my mom came.

Next, Today was Sunday an I had went to church with my grandma. Then the phone started ringing and it said Roaming Call then, that's when I started getting a little scared but I never I picked up the phone. Soo then I went to the restroom and I answered the phone and the person was a he-he said that he wanted to meet me and my friends at 6:00pm. After that he started getting a little crazy on the phone because he said '' YOU KNOW HERE ME I SAID I WANT TO MEET YOU AND YOU'R FRIENDS AT 6:00PM ON ROBINSON ROAD.

Later, that day I met up with everybody and told them what was going on and then that's when dominique and tried to go home but she couldn't or the crazy person was going to get her mom an then she thought about it

Wow. Interesting. I assume this is not a true story? Am I right? Good start. Keep working hard on this today and try to get it finished. - no this is ot true mr.boll..

Ok start here Ciara. I'm interested to hear your story. I think your intro could be stronger. Take a look at "assignment 7" in the assignments for some ideas. Keep writing and working hard. I think you can be a good writer.

Assignment #9

Hello, my name is Ciara and I am going to tell you all about Drake an HEY! if you don't want to miss this......Read it now.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">In this picture right here on the left is Aubrey Drake Graham. His album name is Drake but in the future that is his middle name. Drake was born on October 24, 1986 and he's 24. He became known playing the character of Jimmy Brooks on television series Degrassi:The Next Generation. In June 2009 he signed a recording contract with Dewayne Carter( lil wayne ) young money entertainment.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">When Drake was 5 his parents was divorced, and he was raised by his mother in Toronto's healthy Forrest Hill neighbourhood. Drake attended high school at Forrest Hill Collgiate Institute, where he began acting, but did not graduate. He spent most summers with his father in Memphis. Drake stated that his parents' divorce greatly affected him as a person, saying,  I had to become a man very quickly and be the backbone for a woman who I love with all my heart, my mother.

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">Assignment #10

<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">Progress is good because you can find information quick on the internet and you can communicate through tecnology quick. Another reason it's good because you can find out different things on websites. When people don't read or talk to each other face to face they get on the computer, phone, and others to talk to each others.

<span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">﻿Assignment #11

<span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">Hi Diary, <span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">I'm going to tell you all about my day, so this is how it happen:

<span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">In 1st period I came late and I have gym so when I got down stairs the only thing I was doing was talking to my friends. <span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">In 2nd period I have science and my teacher name is Mr.Cupps. But when I got in his classroom I had to do this worksheet that was suppose to be done on friday but I didn't come to school. <span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">In 3rd period I have reading and my taecher name is Ms.Drane and when we came in there we sat down and started watching the movie The Pursuit of Happiness and then I had to finish my Final test from thursday. <span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">In 4th period I have math and we had to get our computers out so we could do this assignment on the website called [|www.freerice.com] <span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">Then we had lunch and I bought 5 bags of hot cheetos then ate 1 bag in lunch and then other people tried to have a food fight but they got called. <span style="color: #ff00a4; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 170%;">In 5th period I have social studies and when we got in there