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Damion- This isn't working right now. How can I help you do some work in class? This has to change if you want to pass class for the year. You can easily do it, but you have to work a little.

=//__**through tough**__// ﻿//__**times through**__// //__**out his or**__// __//**her life would be**//__ = =__//**a good**//__ __//**motivational**//__ __//**speaker,**//__ = __//**because they will be able to ﻿**//____//**understand**//__ __//**what we are**//__ =__//**going through as children.I think**//__ __//**they would be able to get into our**//__ = =__//**minds better**//__ __//**and motivate us more than someone who**//__ = =__//**always got what they wanted when they wanted**//__ = =__//**it,and never had to go through any tough times.**//__ = =__//**Like facing every day problems in and out of**//__ = =__//**school.They should be able to give us the right advice for**//__ = =__//**the right situation and the right time.They shouldn't**//__ = =__//**give up on you as soon as something goes wrong.**//__ = =Assignment #5.=

Damion, you have a good start here. I think that your reasoning is strong, buy your paper would benefit from some more details. I would like to see your writing when you are staying focused in class and working as hard as you can. I think you can be a really good student, but you have to give me your best work. I can't imagine that what you have here is your best work for two days. Am I right? Make sure you are staying focused.

__//** Assignment #6. **//__ __//** Have you ever been mauled by a bear? I have. My name is Shaun Peterson I was attacked by a bear during **//__ __//** a yearly family reunion|vacation,I was in charge of finding fire wood and food. I went down by the river,and **//__ __//** then I heard twigs snapping and bushes and leaves rustling behind me. But I jus ignored it and just kept **//__ <span style="background-color: #0000ff; color: #ffffff; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 110%;">__//** fishing while my cousin was paranoid of everything he smelled,heard,and saw. **//__

<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #ffff00; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; line-height: 21px;">** __//Assignment #7.//__ **** __//*//__ **** __//Personal Narrative//__ **** __//*//__ **** __//My personal narrative is goin to be about one of my birthday parties from the old days.//__ **** __//When I was younger I had a party and my friends and my cousins and I stayed in my room.//__ **** __//While my sisters and her cousins and friends stayed in their room and did whatever they did.//__ **** __//We played madden on my PS2. The crowd is gathered around us and involved as much as my//__ **** __//opponent and I. The left over people that didn't watch us ran around or wrestled or something.//__ **** __//In the middle of the game everything cut off. I thought my parents and all the adults were messing//__ **** __//with the power box thing. But I just ran around with my friends and cousins. My cousin Shyail and//__ **** __//I were diving around and going on a playful rampage. My sisters and her posse came in my//__ **** __//room and ran around and screamed. Then my dad snuck into my room and hid under my bed.(My bed//__ **** __//is alot higher than a normal bed.) I went over to my bed and he grabbed my ankle. I tried to SCREAM//__ **** __//a warning over the yelling and laughing. But no one paid atention to the brief warning. Then a large//__ **** __//boy named James went over to my bed and my dad grabbed his kankle. He was already screaming,//__ **** __//jumoing and everything else thrice as much. Then the unthninkable happened,he jumped on my//__ **** __//Playstation and broke it!!! That's when I kicked everyone out and we went outside and James' mom//__ **** __//came across the street and got James. She took him in the house. After that we went to my cousins house//__ **** __//and saw it was a black out. We just continued to walk around and then the lights came back on. A few people//__ **** __//left and some stayed the night and we continued the party with about 4 of my friends and 2 of my sisters//__ **** __//friends. We ate played games and other things,then finally we went to sleep. But the legend lived//__ **** __//on as the funnest party of the year!//__ **** __//THE END!!!!!//__ ** <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">**//__ Damion- Again, you are a good writer. If you would focus on school and class you would do a really good job. I wish that you would have worked harder in English this year. I think it could have been really good to see more of your work. Good job with this. __//****//__<span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 19px;">Damion- I'm not sure how to help you do more work. I think you are a good student and can be a really great writer. But class is not working for you right now. Can we talk about this __//****//__<span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 19px;">after school. I always say that "if you work for me, i will work for you." Right now, i am not getting much work from you. Lets talk about it and see if we can find a way to help you out. __//****//__<span style="color: #000000; font-family: arial,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 13px; font-style: normal; font-weight: normal; line-height: 19px;">Assignment #10 __//** <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">Assighntment #10  <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">Marshall Mathers A.K.A Eminem A.K.A Slimshady  <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">Marshall Bruce Mathers III was born on October,17 1972 in St.Joseph,Missouri as an only child. <span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 14px; line-height: 21px;">He was part Scottish,German,Swiss,Polish Assignment #11 My Life During School.

The bells rang as soon as I thought I had enough time to make it and not get in trouble by the teacher and sent out,but I was wrong. I probably would of been on time if I hadden't goofed around with my friends I would've made it. But I wasn't worried about making on time

Great start! Keep going. I think you are a great writer when you work at it.