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s **Shelby! What is going on? We have to do some work to do.**
 * ====**my person i want to come to wilkinsburg middle school is fantasia barrino because she relates to what kids go thought when she was in high school she got raped by her sooner to be later baby dad**====
 * 1) **then got pregnant was struggleing then she took trip to american idol and won and became a star.**
 * 2) **that shows that any body dreams come true she is a insperation to me. she made me to believe**
 * 3) **that all my dreams come true.i love her she is awsome dude:)**
 * 1) **that all my dreams come true.i love her she is awsome dude:)**

Shelby- you have a good start here with your writing. These are good supporting details. You could use some more explanation of these details. For example, why is she inspiring to WMS students? Change this to paragraph style instead of the numbered format. When you are done, keep moving to your descriptive paragraph. Make sure you are working hard in class and staying focused. d

dear,mr rich man can you please make a place were kid can be toutering and

 * have a ball.**
 * **one rason that will be a great idea because some parents work all the time and kids will have a postive** **place to go that will degreas violence in wilkinsburg and keep kid out the street and mom**
 * wont be worried.**
 * **a second rason it will be a great idea that kids who need exra help will get it and it will degress**
 * **drop out rates more kids can go to college**

paragraph about why an after school program would keep kids off the street. It will keep kids off the street because some kids dont have nouthing to do so they turn to drugs and violance .it will help kids alot.and build self estem.the kid will love it. Paragraph about how it would give kids positive things to do. the kid can play all kinds of sports like kick ball basket ball the kid can play on play ground with all kinds of swings and slides a basetball hoop and a activeity spot and tuters for the kids to learn.a kid in the street to turn to drugs and violances and drop out of school thats why u really should take a little percent of your money and invest in a nice after school program.thank you very much. im name is scare i got my name when i was13 i was with my trib hunting igot atacked by a wild wofe i live in africa i felt so sad most of my trib members ran they were so fake but my bestfriend stayed i love him no homo.but that was not my only scare nere my ear. then my best friend took me to a far a way hospital i almost bleaed to death i was so sared for my self i took me a long time to recovery. i got my other scares by fighting a bull to protect my family i felt like a super hero it was great but i was in the hospital my family hold it down i almost died thI ey had to stich by my mouth. i trie not to fight animals no more and stay away from the woo ﻿ds. IT was a cloudy day I couldnt wait till 8 o because i was going to fright night whith anglea monte shemie daysha, cashmere, nelly.casjmere cuzin jamia WHEN I got there it was spooy there was this a clown i ALMOST PEE MY SELF omg when i was walking though the tunnel i was soo scared i was holding nelly hand it was foggey there was scary men whith chain saws people who look like mummeis later so it was me nelly monte shemie anglea nelly we dacied to go to a hunted house it was so nasty becuse nelly and monte went together and they were doing boyfriend and girl friend stuff we decied to go to the hunt ed house monte and nelly were holding hands sheemie was some were and my friend was being a big fat baby and calling her mom so i was walking thought the hunted house bye my selk i was closeing my eyes the was this man who was all in my face in the hunted house he was a very scarey clown i was a bout to cry till i started to run i caught up whith monte and nelly we saw this wanta be scarey bug thing so my friend and her were aruging it was to craZY Ok, good job describing a little about fright night. I would say that you can keep telling the story and make sure you continue to use solid description. YOu could describe your feelings in the haunted house. Keep working hard Shelby. You can be a really great student when you stay focused.
 * im inflenal paper is about lil wayne is real name is dwayne michael carter jr he was born in a neighborhood called hollygrove in new orleans louisiana he was born wehn hes mom a chef was 19 his parents were dievorced when he was two his dad left them he enrolled him self in a gifted program and the drama programHe wrote his first rap song at age eight.In the summer of 1991, he met, rapper and owner of Cash Money RecordCarter recorded freestyle raps on Williams's answering machine, leading him to mentor the young Carter and include him in Cash Money-distributed songs. He also recorded his first ever collaboration album true story with rapper Bg At the time Carter was 11 and bg was 14, and was billed as bg When he was 12 he played the part of the in tin man his middle school drama clubs production of //the wis// At age 13 **** he accidentally shot himself with a 9 mm handgun, and off-duty police officer Robert Hoobler drove him to the hospital. At McMain Magnet School Carter was an honor student, but he dropped out at the age of 14 to focus on a musical career.i think he is in fluenal beacuse he is very smart he reads all the time he got his own label he has new money and i tink he is so awsome :) **

one reason progress is good it is easier like cooking b﻿ acon is easer you can cook it in the microwave ,instead of looking through books we can quickly and search the internet information on google. it also helps people who have medical proplems

A Best Friend! A friend that really cares!** ﻿ ** All my secrets i can share! There when i need a hand! There to understand! When i cry!She will be by!If i am away!She will call me day by day!If i need her at all!She'll be there to stand tall!Anything i say will be heard!She will listen word by word!If I am late! She will open the gate! As she looks in my eyes!The sparkle she realize!She is the one that cares!And the one thats there!That's a best Friend!!