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=ASSIGNMENT:9 The person i think is fluential person is= =Rosa Parks= == =I think that Rosa Parks is a infuential person becuase she was the mother of freedom movement and because everyone know and learn something about her.Here some facts i learn about Rosa Parks .Her birth named was Rosa Louise McCauley and born in Tuskegee, AL on Febuary 4, 1913. Her parents seperated and her mom took her and her brother to live on her grandmothers farm. Rosa develope strong roots from her african methodist episcpol church. Rosa didn't attend school until age 11 when she went to an all girl school, and took various vocational and academic courses. She also took laboratory school for her secondary education but stop to take care of her ailing grandmother. Rosa life was different from us white people and black people was seperated in a lot of was like schools, restrooms, water fountains, and trainsportation.= =ASSIGNMENT:8 How Our Joke Backfired= = We was all running and out of breathe and then we took a stop and when we turn around there she was.Before we get to the story i want to tell you about the characters. The first character i want to tell you about is Mariah tall, light skin, also likes to joke around, dance, and play sports. The next character is Taylor light skin like to hang around her sisters and her friends.Araya light skin she got a smart mouth also likes to dance, act like other people, and she like to sing even though she can't. Dane' brown skin like to talk and text a lot, and like to hang around with her friends. = = ﻿Now that we know the characters and about them let's start at the begining of the story. The five of us was on our summer vactions bored and wanted to find something to do. So we thought of squirting cars as they go past because we didn't have nothing better to do. So Mariah went into her house to get her little cousin water guns. We didn't want to do it in the morning so we went down to the lake that we found when we was walking one day.While we was at the lake we was thinking where we going to shot it at and where we was going to hide so we don't get caught. So we thought of the street we live on becuase there was a lot a places we can hide at. = = So we started home on the trail of frick park. There was a lot of trees,and insects.As we was walking we sawed some friends so we decide it that we will stay at the park for a while.We was talking to friends while we was on the merry-go-around and we sawed some people jungling some bowling pins so we went down there becuase we all was starting to get bored.I was watching him and i notice it was starting to get dark so we left. =

= ﻿So mariah went to get her water guns and she notice she had some water balloons so she brought them out. We waited for at least one car to come past. Then this blue truck came around, andTaylor pick up a red balloon and through it and we hide in the back of my house and watch it go past. So we thought the cars was just keep going and don't stop. So we thought we didn't have to hide anymore. =

= ﻿The next balloon was thrown by Mariah it flew right into this blue car window. Then we watch the car go past. Then we watch the car go past, and then it stop. We ran down to the park we was was all out of breathe. It was already dark so we started to head home becuase it kinda crazy at the park at night. We went into Mariah house thinking that we wouldn't get in trouble and the lady in the blue car was in Mariah house. She reconize us soon as we walk in. We allk ended up with two weeks of punishment. = Domenique, you are doing a good job with this. You are doing a good job describing the day. I would say you should keep telling this story. I'm interested to hear what happens when you throw the balloons.

Good start Domenique. I like your description of the characters. Maybe you could look at writing an attention-getting intro to help generate some interest in your story. I can help you with this in class. Maybe you could ask a question or start with a description of something. Then, you could stop and say, "but before we get to the story..."

=ASSIGNMENT:6 My name is Shawn Willison and this is my story. I was at home 5 days before the tornado storm and the news came on it talk about how there going to be a tornado storm on friday the day i was giong to ask my girlfriend to marry me. So i really didn't pay no attention because we never had a tornado storm since 1904. My girlfriend was really worried that it would hit so she started packing her stuff. = = I kept telling her not to worrry but i could tell that she was worried. The next day my girlfriend left with her mom to get some were safe but i just went to work. I was so angry that everyone was scary of the storm then i finally scream out to my boss that there wasn't going to be a storm and i guest he got mad because he said that i'm fired me, so now i don't have no job and i couldn't even asked my girlfriend to marry me because she was gone thinking that there was going to be a storm. So it's the finally day they said would be the storm, so i took out my grill and started cooking something for lunch for me and my friends that was coming over. I look up at the sky and the clouds was kinda dark so i didn't really pay no attention to it and kept grilling. = = So later only one of my friends came and the wind was picking up. Then we saw the tornado but it was to late for us to run into the basement so we ran away from it i was so terrified and i thought to myself how i should of listen to the news and my friends. So we kept running almost out of breathe.Then we saw a mountain it was cold and we had no choice but to go up the mountain and the tornado was gaining on us.We was almost up the montain but it was to late the tornado caught us. I thought i was going to die and that's when my friend got caught and flew in the air =

=ASSIGNMENT:4= = Going to school is a good thing because if you go to school in do good in it you can get a good job that pay good money. Everyone wants a lot in life noyone is not going to give you something for free. The only way to get what you want is to get a job so you can get some money but you can't get a good job without a high school diploma, a college diploma, and some aquire a master degree. If you want you can own your own company if you finsh school. If you fish high school and get good grades and join clubs you van get a full scholarship =

=ASSIGNMENT:3 HOW TO MAKE PIZZA. First you think about what kind of pizza you want to make to make.Then you want to have all the stuff to make your pizza.You set the oven before you cook. Next you get the pizza dough. Then you get a spreader and the sauce. You pour the sauce and then you spread it. Next you get the cheese and sprinkle as much cheese as you want. Then you put some toppings on that you like. You put it in the oven and wait about 10-20 minutes. You get some mittens to get it out. Next you wait to it cools and you cut it.Last you eat the pizza. = = ASSIGNMENT:2 The area i choose to describe is downtown pittsburgh. When i go downtown pittsburgh i see a green bridge, i see people of different kinds, i also see lots and lots of pigeons. I also see a green, black, and white sign that read star bucks. A yellow taxi andpeople rushing to work or try'in to catch a bus.I smell different kinds of foods and i see people cooking and ordering. = = ASSSIGNMENT: 1 I think that Stevie Wonders is a speaker that can motivate WMS because even though he is blind he still find a way to play and write music.I also think he is a good motivate speaker because he succeeded in life. He also made a fortune from his music. Blindness never stop him from doing what he likes, that why i think it motivat students to never give up no matter what. If a blind man can do it we all can do it. Stevie Wonder been through a lot just like most of us. I think it don't matter what you do in life you should always make a good choice that why i choose Stevie Wonders can motivate WMS. = Good job with your motivational speaker work. I think you could still proofread this to see if you see any corrections that need to be made. You did a really nice job staying organized in your writing. A little more detail would not hurt: What could WMS students learn from how Stevie Wonder has responded to hard things in his life. = Good start here. Keep up the good work. =