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1) blind fury because he is a blind rapper and is doing somthing any one person could do and he could motavate us to do our best in school and that no matter what disablity we have or no matter how hard the work is we should never give up and keep going and i say this because usally when the going gets tuff everyone wants to give up and does not want to be that person that can do it and can make and this is a good mindset to keep in life and in school and you can be that tipical person but with hard work and good motevationyou can be that person.

Assignment#2 this rooms walls are white ir dirty white the blinds are messed up and big the four window are big also there are two doors to get out into the hallway there is a big promtheum board in the front of the room there are chairs in here in the shape of a v there are two closets in this room there is a chalk board to the left of the room the floor is brown with little strips on the floor there is a poster that says BIG ?'s and there is a desk in the back of the room and there is a chalk board to the front and to the back of the room there are these long light on the ceiling this is the description of this room. Good description of the room. I really think you can be a great writer Ivan. Keep working hard and staying focused and I think you will improve a lot. The description and content here is good. There are some sentence things that we can improve. For starters, this paragraph is all one sentence. A simple sentence is made up a subject (noun) and a action verb. We can talk about it more. Good start. Assignment#3 You can develop good accuracy in basketball by grabing a basketball with your shooting hand.then putting the ball above your head just 3 or 4 feet above your head. then and shot the ball over and over to get used to the motion of your hand.A good way to practice your passing techniques would be to stand 10 to 20 feet away from the wall. Then pick a point onthe wall to hit.Then try different passes on the wall to hone your basketball passing skills.To hone your dribbling, techniques you should first set up pylons and dribble in between them to improve your dribbling.Then another way you can improve your dribbling skills in to bounce 2 basketballs at a time this is a way to improve 3 important things in basketball. Assignment#4 The NFL is the most popalur sport in america with so many fans asking and debating who is the best team and who is going to win the super bowl im here today to give you my opinion on who is the best team and what teams have the qualities to be the best team of the year and the team to win the super bowl lets start with the team that has good qualites the new england patriots tom brady he is a all around a good player and the highest paid quarter back in the league but the thing that makes him not the best quarter back in the league is his temper one miss and he gets upset and that brings the team down and if he changes that he can be a pretty good player now on to the vikings

brett farve he is a all around good player he can make the throws take the hits but his age is the thing that brings him down he is getting older and the hits and throws are bringin down but another person on that team that makes them a feared team is AP Adrian peterson he is a star player that makes the big runs and the big plays he is a rough and tuff dude he fights for his yards and makes the catches and follows his blocks but without the QB to establish or set up that play they cant score but this is a team i would for sure add to my list of teams that can make it to the super bowl or has the talent to.

my next team i would nominate for having the talent to make it to the super bowl and has make plenty of times and has 6 super bowl rings is steelers and the reason why is say this is because of the big man big ben he is a all around good QB he makes the throws he is a good clutch in the 2 quarter he can scramble he takes hits takes risk and a good motivatior and asset to the team but one thing about him is how he talks alot of trash and that gets him hurt but another good player on that team has to be is troy polumalu because he is a good asset one the team on defense he is so flexible in the positions he plays saftey but plays like a 4 linebacker this is why i would pick this team as a nomine.

now for my last team it is the Jets the reason why is would pick the jets is because of there elite team and well rounded team lets start with mark sanchez he is a good player good asset to the team ok throwning good leadership but he has some flaws like he cant throw accurate deep he is not a good clutch once hes down in scores then it takes alot for him to rebound another good player would be (LT) [|Tomlinson, LaDainian] he is a hard runner fast in open field agile can make the score has god BC vision and when there is no hole he makes a hole he is a clutch player this is one of the best running backs in the NFL this is why i pick the jets as a nomine.

these are some teams i would pick to be able to reach the super bowl has reached the super bowl and will reach the super bowl the NFL is the bigest know thing a will stay it and everyone always has something to debate about who the best team who the best player is and most important of all who goes to the super bowl and will win and in this essay i gave you a little bit of my opinion and this is my debate.

Assignment#5

I was reading about a 7year old and a 9year old rapping a baby i think this is soo bad and soo crazy that a kid nearly a baby or toddler rapping another toddler which is so sad what this socity has become that these little kids are doing stuff they see and hear on tv and why i think this is so wrong because no kid would ever think about doing this unless they have seen it done before and it is soooo sad and sicking that a 7yr old and 9yr old have to rape a toddler just because and have no reason for it i think these parents should be carful what there kids hear and see on tv and in real life and let them know that that stuff is not ment to be done by them and that stuff is for bad people this is how i feel about this artical.

Assignment#6 have you ever been captured by the enemy then tortured cut four times in the face and head then left there to bleed to death i have my name is Jason Cpt.Jason and this is my story it all started when me and my squad went on a misson to infiltrate and clear the enemy checkpoint and i was in charge of my squad there was 5 of us including me we had to go 38 miles through the jungle and through the woods i thought this misson would go smooth because when in the army you live for moments like this to so me and my squad set out 30 miles into the jungle my squad was tired we needed to keep going but mysquad couldn't take another step so me and my squad rested there for the night but when i woke up we were surronded by the enemy takin to there camp where we stayed tortured and beatin they cut me 4 times in the face and all i ate there was a piece of my ear to survive but then one of the guard sliped up i took his knife cut his neck then headed out of there by the time i got out of there i was bleeding tired but keep moving then i came across a bunch of figures moving in the distance i ran up to them and it was my squad they where fine they had killed the enemy sqaud and had gottin out of there and was happy to see them agian they had set a flare and got me some help to get out of there this is a moment in life i will always remeber and will never forget this is my story.

Assignment#7 it was the first day of oklahomas it was my rookie year and i was hitting up with one of the best hitters on my team and it was my first time doing it so coach blew the whistle and from there i knew it was going to be a long session.So then it happened i hit up with him and he got hurt and i was fine what a surprise.Then i hit up with someone else but he brought me down but the whole time i thought it would be worse like i would get hurt or sumtin but that was just the begining of the lessons.I learned and the difficulties i have over come.

It was the second day of practice it summer it was 90 degrees outside way to hot for football.There where guys running around the field full pads.i could see the heat waves in front of me while running.Sweat dripping into my eyes kids exhausted water bottles every where coaches calling drills back to back no break for like 20 minutes and then the hardest drill ever barrel rolls this was sooo tiring and then i just thought i can not do this never ever agian this is just a every day practice but it pays off in the end

it was our first game the crowed going wild soo many people in the stands to many to count. old people young people short people tall people sons daughters friends family you could barley hear yourself scream the other team was soo discouraged i could see it in there drills and in there chant soo we got on the field and prayed then my coach tole all of us to go out there and play our hearts out and most of all have fun that is all he can ask of us wether we win or loss so this is how our firsg game started we won 34-14 all felt soo confident

it was the practice before the big game the championship against our rival that beat us earlyer in the year 14-7 and that was the hardest parctice i was sweating but not that bad but it was tiring and it really got us in shape for this final battle the big one the top dog we where going to go out there dominate in there house and make them go home lossers and we were going to go home winners and down in history

it was the day of the game i had butterflies but i knew we would win because i had the best players of my team on my side i knew we would win after beating us soo close in a game like that this is one of my favorite games ever we went in there had fun scored 40 secondes on the clock 4th quater up by 7 all we have to do is stop them on this last drive they say hike HB gets ball reverse we stop him on the one yard line this was the perfect championship this is why this was one of my favorite games ever.

Ok Ivan- I remember you talking on Wednesday to highlight some of the most important or memorable moments of the season. Keep going with this. YOu will need to work really hard today to make sure you finish this assignment.

Ivan- I like your writing here. I think you could use a paragraph before this one to introduce your narrative. Something that would get the readers interest. "Summer days are to hot for football. The July sun is beating down on the grass that hasn't seen rain in the last month. Dust is flying through the air as players in full pads run around the field. To make it harder, this was just my first year." You don't have to use that, but something like that would get the readers attention.

christpher george ﻿latore or as we know him as (Biggie Smalls) one of the most notorious rappers ever. His top selling albums ever life after death then second best ready to die he was big in the east coast west coast rapping feud one of his best friends tupac also a big rapper at the time soon became one of biggies rivals

biggie smalls grew up in clinton hill on the east coast biggie later along the line died in a drive by in los angeles a little after his death two more of his albums where released these albums that where released where some of his best

A couple years after biggies death they opened the file to the public and biggies killer has not been found and case is still open to this day.Biggie and Tupacs death ruptured the rap world.Even though biggie is dead so is tupac there legend still lives. This progress is good because....

the reason why it is good because of how easy it makes things example your job also your house hold choures it could be so easy now everything free how does that sound awesome robots can do that we can save money because we have to pay them no money! but they work as hard as us for no pay this could help our goverment get out of debt but we wont need money soo....also the prison would not be overcrowded because robots would hold our guns or drugs and such and only high goverment officals know the passcode to the armory.

Day1 my first day here at whs (Wilkinsburg high school/middle school) it was hectic streesing but worth it then i come home my mom is like " iiivan how was your first day at skool" "fine mom crazy but fine" "o thats good" so then my worst but best skool year starts.

Day2 the worst in the skool shows the hecticness crazinest