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Assignment#11
==-One Reason Why Progress Is Good,Because It Makes Things Easier.If You Need To Find,Were A Place Is Or The Phone Number To It You Can Go On The Internet.It Also Is Easier Because You Can Find Alot Of Information.It Also Is Good For Communication.If You Can't Get In Touch With Someone You Can Contact Them On The Internet.Another Reason Why It's Good Is It Can Make Things Faster.You Can Find Gossip Before You Can Find It On The News==

Before He Was Famous:
==Before Justin Bieber Was Famous,He Was Just A Regular Young Boy Trying To Live His Dreams.At Age 2 He Began Playing Instruments.His Mom Would Have Her Friends Come Over And Bring Their Instruments.He Was Playing A Chair As A Drum Until Christmas When His Mother Bought Him His Own Drum Set.He Banged On That Until He Was About 5.Then His Mom Bought Him A Bigger Drum Set.At Age 4== == Good start here. I think it is early for me to give you an opinion. Work on an attention-getting intro to draw the reader into the story. Destine, you could also try a little harder to stay focused in class. You do a great job with homework and usually complete you classwork, but you can do a better job a focusing, not talking, and paying attention. ==

It's Fun On A Plane,But They Can Be Scary Your First Time.
==One Day My Nana Ask Did I Want To Go To Alanta To See My Great-Uncle,My Aunt,My Big Cousin,And My Two Baby Cousins.So My Nana,My Aunt,And Me Got 3 Tickets To Go To Alanta Georgia.I Was Really Excited And I Went To The Mall The Next Day After School.I Told All My Friends And They All Was Happy For Me Because It Was My First Time On A Plane.After School Indionna,My Mom,And Me Went To The Mall.I Knew It Was Goin To Be Hot While We Were There So I Picked Some Cool Clothes That I Really Knew Would Keep Me Cool.Then I Went Home And I Started Packing.The Next Day At School Around Lunchtime My Mom Came To Pick Me Up.I Said Goodbye To All My Friends And My Teachers.== ==On The Way To The Airport My Nana,My Mom,And Me Stopped At Store To Get My Aunt ,And Me Somethings To Do On The Plane.After We Left There We Were On The Highway.We Were Stuck In Lots Of Traffic.I Was Kind Of Sad And Mad Cause I Thought We Would Miss Our Flight.Then When We Got Through The Traffic,I Knew We Would Not Miss Our Plane.We Had A Half-Hour To Get Through Security And On The Plane.== ==When We Arrived At The Airport,I Was Kind Of Amazed Because I Couldn't Believe I Was Going On A Plane.I Was Kind Of Lost Looking At Everything In Amazement.At Secruity I Was Kind Of Scared Because I Thought I Would Have To Go Home Because I Thought The Monitor Was Going To Beep And I Would Get Jumped By Security.Luckily I Didn't.Then After We Got Off The Plane My Nana,My Aunt And Me Was Lost In The Airport.It Was So Big,But Then My Uncle Saw Us.He Already Had Our Baggage.I Was Glad Because Where You Get Your Baggage From Was Super Cowded.== ==After We Arrived At My Uncle's House,We Went To Put Our Clothes Up.The Room's Were Very Big.I Even Had My Own Room And Didn't Have To Share Nothing.I Went Downstairs To See My 2 Baby Cousins.I Was Amazed Bexause The Last Time I Saw Them,They Were Babies.After That It Was About 9:30 P.M.We Then Ate Dinner.After Dinner I Went To This Store With My Big Cousins Girlfriend.We Went To This Store That Was As Big As Target And Walm-Mart But A Little More Bigger.== ==The Next Day,We Went To My Other Cousin'S House.We Were Outside Playing All Day.Then We Were Sitting On The Porch,And We Saw A Anthill.We Went Over There To See If There Was Ant's In There.At First We Didn't See Any,Then My Cousin Poked The Hill With A Stick.Then All These Red Ant's Came Running After Us.Then We Went In The House.Later On I Went Back To My Uncle's House.== ==The Next Day,We Went Shopping.We Went To This Big Mall With Lots Of Different Stores I Never Heard Of.It Was Super Crowded But Everyone Was Nice And Friendly Towards Me.We Went Home To Start To Clean Up A Little For My Little Cousins Birthday Party The Next Day. The Next Day,We Got Up Early To Go Get Something's For The Party.I Thought It Would Of Been Quick,But There Were Lots Of People Out.We Went To Party City,It Took About A Hour,Because Oonce You Get In That Store You Would Want To Play.Party City Was Way Bigger Then Our's.When We Arrived Back Home,My Nana Took,My Aunt And My Little Cousin To The Park So They Wouldn't Know What Was Going On.When They Came Back In The House They Got Dressed And Some Party Guest's Arrived.== ==Later On,We Were Sitting Outside.I Was Happy Because My Cousins Had Came.Then When The Party Ended We Made Plans To Go Skating The Next Day.When I Woke Up I Got In The Shower And Dressed,Then Called My Cousin.We Went To This Skating Ring But We Were To Young To Skate There,So We Went To This Other One Down The Street.It Was Boting Because We Were The Only One There Plus The Owner And His Kids.So I Called My Nana To Come Pick Us Up.Then When We Left We Saw A Whole Lot Of People In The Parking Lot.My Nana Asked Did We Want To Go Back We Said No.== ==The Next Day It Was Time To Leave.I Was Happy Because I Wanted To See My Family And Friends,And Give Them Their Gifts.I Went To Go Pack My Clothes.After I Said Good-Bye To My Family Then We Rushed To The Airport.I Gave A Hug To My Uncle And Thanked Them For Letting Us Come Visited.Then When We Were Going Through Security I Wasn't Scared.After Like 5 Hours We Arrived Home.My Mom Was Already There.I Ran To Her.We Went Home And My Family Was Home.I Gave Them Their Gifts.They Were Happy And Thankful.==

That Is A Time When I Went On A Plane My First Time.
Good job so far Destine. I think you have a really good start here. I'm interested to know how the flight went. You are doing a good job describing this and working on this. Keep it up. YOu should probably finish this narrative today. Assignment#6:Hi,My Name Live In Africa.We Have Had Lots Of Hurricanes,But This Have Been The Worst Of All. ==It Was June,23,2001 At 11:43 P.M.Me And My Faily Knew Something Bad Was About To Happen,Because It Has Been In Raining All Day An Now I We Were Beginning To See Flashes Of Lightning In The Sky.We Crowded Into Our Little Tents And Prayed It Wouldn't Be Nothing Worst Then What We Had In The Past.We Had Goin To Sleep Around 12:56 A.M.I Awoke Around 3:12 A.M And I Took A Peak Out Of The Tent.I Saw A Tornadoe Was Forming In The Sky And The Ground Was Beginnig To Shake.I Woke My Family Up And We All Ran To The Hall.The Hall Is A Place Were We Go When It Begins Raining And Thundering.Then Me And My Family Huddled Up In A Big Circle.We Watched As AllThe Other Families Began To Do The Same.Then I Felt The Ground Shaking.I Knew IThere Was Going To Be A Earthquake.Me And The Other Families Prayed That It Wouldnt Be Nothing Major But Then I Heard The Wind Blowing A Tent Toward The Building.I Was Glad== ==It Wasn't A Hurricane But Kind Of Upset Because There Was A Earthquake And A Tornadeo Striking Us.Later On That Day I Didnt Want To Look Out The Door.I Knew Our Town Was Going To Look Very Bad And It Was Going To Take A Couple Months To Get Half The Town Clean.==

Assignment#5:My Article Is About A 14-Month Infant Alone At Home And Her Landloard Goes To The Home And Find The Infant Laying Rapped In A Blanket.
==I'll Persuade Someone Not To Leave Their Child Alone At Home.I Will Persuade Someone Not To Leave Their Child Alone Becuse You Don't Know What Could Happen While Their Child Is At Home.I Would Also Persuade Someone Not To Leave Their Child Alone Because,Your House Can Get Robbed Or Shot At And The Child Could Get Hurt.Leaving Your Child Alone Is Like Aboanding Their Child.If You Don't Want The Child You Can Put The Child Up For Adoption.If You Can't Find Someone To Babysit The Child You Can Take The Child Over A Friend/Neighbor's Home Or Put Her In A Daycare. That Is Why I Would Persuade Someone Not To Leave Their Child Alone.==

Assignment #4:I Would Like To Persuade You To Not To Drop Out.
==﻿My First Reason I Would Persuade Someone Not To Drop Out Because I Think Everyone Should Get The Knowledge,They Already Began Getting.I Think That Because What If Out Drop Out And You Have Kids.When The Kids Get Older They Might Need Help With Their Homework.The Parents Won't Be Able To Help Their Child And There Child Might Drop Out.== ==My Second Reason Is So You Can Get A Good Job.It's Hard To Get Jobs Now Days.If You Want A Good Job,You Have To Have A Degree And At Least Have Be Able To Do The Math On A Cash Register Or Just Know How To Do The Math.No Matter Where You Work It Involes Math Or Reading.==

First,You Make Sure You Have All The Ingredients.The Ingredients Are Pizza Crust,Cheese,Pizza Sauce And Any Toppings You Like O Your Pizza.If You Don't Go Get The Ingredients Before You Start.
==﻿First,Pre-Heat The Oven .Then Start To Make The Pizza. Put The Crust On A Piece Of Aluminum Foil Or A Cooking Sheet.Next Spread The Pizza Sauce On The Crust.Then Put On The Cheese.Last,If You Want Toppings Put On Toppings.==

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=Assignment #2:= ==A Description Of My Of My House Is That It Is A Red Brick House.It Has Four Bedrooms Not Including The Bathrooms,Kitchen,Dinning Room,And Living Room.There Are One Room Downstairs And Three Upstairs.When You Walk In The Front Door,There Are The teps To Go Upstairs.If You Go Straight In There Is The Door To The Basement.Walk In A Little And Turn There Is The Living Room,Dinning Room,Bedroom,And Kitchen.When You Go Upstairs There Is My Mom's Room,The Bathroom,My Little Sister And Brother's Room,Then My Room With All My Justin Bieber Poster's.That Is My Description Of My House.==

Question:Pick A Speaker To Motivate Wilkinsburg Middle School Students And Persuade The Reader Why That Is The
=Best Choice.= ==Answer:I Would Pick Halle Berry And Justin Bieber.I Would Pick Halle Berry And Justin Bieber Because They Are Always Giving Or Donating To The Homeless.Halle Berry Made This Building For The Homeless So They Can Give Themselves And Their Children. A Home And To Get Their Health Together.She Even Donated Clothes,Pampers,Food,And Supplies== =For Their Children Too.Justin Bieber Donates A Couple Dollars To The Poor From Every Ticket From His Concerts.He= =Makes Songs And Does Good Deeds For The Poor.They Can Teach Us To Give And Not To Just Think About= =Ourselves.That Is Why I Would Pick Halle Berry Or Justin Bieber. =

Destine- This is a good reason to respect someone. I didn't know these things about Justin Bieber or Halle Berry. Why do you think that WMS students could benefit from learning to think about someone else? I think this is good, but support why you think this message would be so important for WMS students. Good start.