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=**//﻿ ﻿ Assignment #1: //**=
 * =**A speaker I would like to pick to motivate WMS students is Jennifer Hudson. I would like to pick Jennifer Hudson because she is a strong woman that went through alot in her life. I think she would be a good speaker because I think she would influence people to do good in school and never give up. Another reason why I think Jennifer Hudson would be a good speaker is because Jennifer is a actress and a singer, so I think she would influence children to be something better in life.** =

=**//Assignment #2: //**= = I think this is an insightful, and descriptive paragraph. Good job. -Mr.Boll = =**//Assignment #3: //**= =//Assignment #4:// =
 * =**This person is a black old man. He is homeless. He doesn't have a home, so he lives outside in the cold weather. He used to have a job. He don't have it no more because he couldn't get to work on time so his boss fired him. He get's his food by asking people on the streets or digging out of the trash can. He haven't had a hair cut in 3 months. His wife and kids left him. They left him because he didn't have a job and couldn't pay the bills anymore. I personally think his life is going down hill because he doesn't have anyone in his life to love him.** =
 * **How to: How to make toast bread**
 * **First you get out the bread**
 * =**Then you get out the butter** =
 * =**After that you put your bread inside the toaster** =
 * =Fourth, when the toast is ready to come out then you take it out , but be sure the toast don't burn you ! =
 * =Next you butter your toast =
 * =Finally you taste your bread and see if you like it :) =
 * =1) Kids should go to school all the time. They should go to school all the time so they can get there education. Only time kids shouldn't come to school is when there sick or going somewhere very important. At wilkinsburg if you don't come to school you HAVE to come back to school with a note saying why you didn't come to school. If you miss to many days at wilkinsburg and don't bring in no excuses, then you will have to go to court. =
 * =<span style="color: #00ffff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">2) If your late to school then you will get after school detention. If you don't come to detention then you will get a phone call home and a referral. If your late to class then you will get detention. Another way you can get detention is by if you get in trouble in class. My last example how you can get detention is by if your horse playing in the halls. =
 * =<span style="color: #00ffff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">3) School is very important. School is important because if you don't go to school then you won't get your education. Another reason why school is important is because when you get older you won't get a good paying job with no education. My next reason why school is important is because if you don't go to school then your reading and writing skills will go down. My last reason why school is very important is because when you go to school you can stay off the streets and stay out of trouble. =
 * =<span style="color: #00ffff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">4) When your in the classroom you should pay attention all the time. You should pay attention because if you don't pay attention then you won't get alot of work done in class. Another reason why you should pay attention in class is because if you don't then you won't learn things you should. My next reason why you should pay attention in class is because you will be getting left behind in work. My last reason why you should pay attention in class is because if you don't then your grades will go down real bad. =


 * =<span style="color: #00ffff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;"><span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">5) Good start Daysha. Keep working hard on your writing and you will improve a lot. I think you should start this by talking about how missing school is a problem here at Wilkinsburg. What effect does it have on students. Keep what you have above, because i think you can use it in this essay. Good job, keep it up. -Mr.Boll =

=<span style="color: #9e00ff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Assignment #7 =
 * =<span style="color: #9e00ff; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">My name is Asita. I'm from Haiti (Africa). I'm 14 years old. I am a girl. Today I was on my way to visit my grandmother. On my way there i got into some trouble with some older men. I was just minding my own business walking and then out of nowhere the older men started to jump me. I felt them cutting my face and my body up. I couldn't do anything to save myself because they were to strong for me. All I could remember is me passing out and then they taking me to this crazy looking place. There was blood everywhere. I was scared out of my mind. =

=<span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Assignment #8 =
 * =<span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Old people are sometimes mean. I'm sure they are nice sometimes too, but for the purposes of this story I am thinking of the mean ones. But this one time, my nephew, my neighbor, and I were outside. When we were outside this old lady was outside planting her plants. The lady was white with gray and blonde hair mixed together. She had a husband, he was black with black hair. I didn't like the old lady because everytime we went outside to play she would always tell us to go back home. I tried to tell my mom and my granny , but they didn't do anything. =


 * =<span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">It's not that I don't like old people it's just that they just get on my nerves. Sometimes when I just be minding my own business, a old person would just cuss me out for no reason. I think I could get along with older people if they would just leave me alone and mind there business. If they would leave me alone then everything would be okay. The only older people I like is my grandparents, because there very nice. =


 * =<span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">This one time my nephew, my neighbor, and I were outside and my old neighbor was outside too planting her plants. When she was planting her plants we were playing with a ball. The ball was round and green with some blue on it. Then the ball accidently went into the old lady's garden, so she got mad and yelled at us. When she yelled at us she turned red or pink. There was spit coming out of her mouth. We all got scared. So we all ran frantically. My nephew and I went inside my granny's house and my friend went to her house next door. =


 * =<span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">When me and my nephew went in my granny's house I called my friend. I called my friend I asked her where she was at. She told me she was inside her house, so I told her to come back outside. When we came outside the old lady was inside her house. We all started to play hide and go seek. =


 * =<span style="color: #008080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">While we were playing outside we got SUPER hot and tired. So we went inside the house to get some water. After we got some water we went back outside. We didn't want to play hide and go seek no more, so we just chilled. The lady came back outside to finish planting her garden. =

= Good job Daysha. Again, I think you are a really good writer. You are doing a good job describing here. I really like the image of her yelling at you and the use of the adverb "frantically." I can picture this because of your description. Keep working hard on this, and continue using the strong description. =

=<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Great start here Daysha. You did a good job with the description of the lady. I think you should expand on the "Old people are sometimes mean" intro before you get into the description. Maybe you could add something like, "I'm sure they are nice sometimes too, but for the purposes of this story I am thinking of the mean ones." Good start,and you don't have to use my idea... just a thought. = =<span style="color: #808080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Assignment #10 = =
 * =<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Good job with this Daysha. I like the descriptive addition that includes feelings. Keep going. You are a really good writer. =
 * =<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Good job with this Daysha. I like the descriptive addition that includes feelings. Keep going. You are a really good writer. =
 * =<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Good job with this Daysha. I like the descriptive addition that includes feelings. Keep going. You are a really good writer. =

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 * =<span style="color: #808080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">The person that influences me is T Boz. T Boz was born on April 26, 1970 in Des Moines,Iowa. As a child Watkins was diagonosed with sickle-cell anemia. She also had a brain tumor when she was 3. T Boz just turned 40 years old last year (April,2010). T Boz was her stage name. =
 * =<span style="color: #808080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">T Boz's real name is Tionne Tenese Watkins. She was in a group called TLC. She was one of the lead singers. The other lead singers were Chilli and Left Eye. In August 2000, Watkins married rapper Mack 10. Then later on on in 2004 she filed for a divorce. T Boz had a child named Chase Anela Rolison, was born on October 20, 2000. =
 * =<span style="color: #808080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">In march 2006, she was diagnosed having a strawberry-size acoustic neuroma on her vestibular nerve, which affected her balance, hearing, sight and facial movement. Many physicians refused to remove the tumor due to her sickle-cell-related complications, leaving her alternatives grim; ultimately she underwent surgery at Cedars-Sinai Hospital at Los Angeles. =

=<span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Assignment #11 =
 * =<span style="color: #808080; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">﻿ One reason why progress is good is because it's easier. If you need to find something out then you can go on google and find anything for real. Another reason why it's easier is because you can save more time looking it up on the internet than wasting time looking in books. My last reason why it's easier is because it's more easier to communicate to your friend's or family. =


 * =<span style="color: #800000; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">One reason why progress is good is because you save more time. If your in a rush you can get on the computer and make it do it faster. =

=<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Assignment #12 =

=<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">When I first came to Wms I didn't liked it, but as the year went on I really like it. I didn't like it because the teachers were getting on my nerves. But as the year went on I liked it because I started to get used to it. My feelings about 7th grade are good. They are good because me and my classmates have had good times. One experiences that I have had in the 7th grade is this one time when the whole 7th grade and 8th grade went to Kennywood. When we went to Kennywood I had a great time. . . until =
 * =<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Dear future 7th grades, =